Wells, so far I've not find a suitable part-time job..
So I'm plannin to spend some time writing a story..
I got an inspiration from an anime comic book i recently read..
So, plannin to see whether I can convert it to a Singaporean context..

Ok u noe usually there r some books that have a small excerpt,
mainly to entice u 2 read more of the book..
So I'll give a preview of one of the small drama n excitement I plan to put in the story..
Pls do give me comments like
Whether its a good read n shud try pursue it,
or if its a waste of time n do something more meaningful in life...

Here it goes...
I'm calling this "story of mine" => Hannah-Anna

"How could you do that to Hannah you Bastard?!
Chee Bai, she's so concerned for you and you gop wasting your time with that bitch over there!"

Anna pointed to the sobbing Cassie. You could see Anna's pointing arm shivering.
Not with fear, but to contain the blood boiling from within.

Jason just froze.
He was numbed by the actions of the angry lady in front of him.
In fact, nobody moved.
Nobody could take what they've seen tonight.
It was just too......... awkward.."

"Talk you fucking bastard! Why I outta.."
Anna raised her fist.
It was heading for his face,
and yet, Jason couldn't react.
Mayb he felt it was his fate to accept the deserved punishment from her punch.
He just closed his eyes,
embracing what was about to come...

"NO DON'T!!!"

Suddenly, Cassie went right in between the two of them,
ready to accept the blow for him instead.
Fortunately, or unfortunately,
Anna stopped her fist just in time before it hit anyone.
It was more out of confusion, wondering,
What's wrong with this bitch?

"If you wanna hit someone, hit me!
I was the one who kept insisting even though I knew he was attached."

The boiling point within Anna just toned down a notch.
She unclenched her fist as she relexed her body,
but just a little bit.
She stared at the seemingly innocent teary eyes of Cassie's.

"You got balls girl...."
"Hey Hannah, don't you wanna fight for your man?"

Finally the attention shifted to Hannah.
She was in distraught.
Her eyes were puffed up with tears.
Obviously!
Who wouldn't feel like that after seeing her boyfriend hugging Cassie the way he did earlier.
She was angry.
But her anger just converted into tears.
She just felt helpless.
Why should I fight?

"I don't wanna fight for a man like that!"

Her fairytale relationship had just ended.
Hannah just wanted to run away from there.
She finally realised how unidealistic the real world is from the fairy tales she have always dreamt of.
So, Hannah quickly took Anna by the hand and ran away as fast as she could with her.
She didn't know where she was heading,
But, for both Hannah and Jason,
there was no turning back now........

"If it wasn't for Anna that night,
I would have thrown myself into the Singapore River....."
- Hannah


So ppl, hope u like it...
Tag for comments pls n thx...